We sit and watch the candle burning down,
Its fleeting flame unsteady as the white
Wax turns to water, lapping at the light.
How long before we see it gasp and drown,
Abandoning us to the circling night?
We sit and watch the candle burning down.
And slowly, too, our dreams are overthrown;
Consumed by all that made them burn so bright.
Long miles from sleep, and yet too tired to fight,
We sit and watch the candle burning down.
Another Chaucerian rondel. My daughter (unwittingly) gave me the refrain line a few evenings ago, but it’s taken me until now to find the time to do something with it. N.
Nick this is wonderful and I just love it! 😊 X
Thank you – not entirely sure myself what this one’s about, but it sort-of wrote itself, so I guess mine is not to reason why! N.xx
Wonderful air to the poem.
Thanks, Charles.
Love it 🙂 xx
Thank you Ina – I just need someone to tell me what it’s about now! N.xx